Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Shhh..

Eyes, wide shut
last call from tavern, missed
but the wine drips

Come, she says.

Glasses, misty
rain sneaks in, heavy
vigil jitters

Breathe, she says.

Muted, beautiful,
naive chalice, shattered
desired but unwelcome

Drink, she says.

Aroma, faint
indistinct moan, deceitful
begins to utter

Shhhh, She says.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice imagery!
it very good. i am disappointed that you have not written in a long time.

as rakhi says to amitabh bachhan in kabhi kabhi, apne likhna kyu chor diya?

Anonymous said...

English people. Lets speak English already!!!

Sonny Sultani said...

I like it, interesting... What caused you to write this?

Anonymous said...

His love for men. Isn't it obvious?

aliG said...

poetry is not my forte. I will admit that I do not understand any of it. I've felt that way since elementary school. Dam nursery rhymes. It seems rather dramatic though. Whatsup?

Mariam Aly Khan said...

i re-blogged. khush?